Hemingway, the quintessential (a very un-Hemingway word!) outdoors man. He was also one of the best short story writers in American literature. Below read a quote from his masterpiece Big Two-Hearted River. The protagonist, Nick Adams, has just returned from the war (WWI), though that is not mentioned in the story. This exemplifies another Hemingway technique, the "ice-berg theory." That is, as he said, if you know your subject well enough, you don't have to explain everything. It's significance will come through to the reader. Or, perhaps the reader will glean more from the bare-bones writing than he/she would from any explanatory detail.
"He
baited up, then picked up the rod and walked to the tar end of the logs
to get into the water, where it was not too deep. Under and beyond
the logs was a deep pool. Nick walked around the shallow shelf near
the swamp shore until he came out on the shallow bed of the
stream.
"On the left, where the meadow
ended and the woods began, a great elm tree was uprooted. Gone over
in a storm, it lay back into the woods, its roots clotted with
dirt, grass growing in them, rising a solid bank beside the stream. The river cut to the edge of the uprooted tree. From where Nick stood
he could see deep channels like ruts, cut in the shallow bed of the
stream by the flow of the current. Pebbly where he stood and pebbly
and full of boulders beyond; where it curved near the tree roots,
the bed of the stream was marry and between the ruts of deep water
green weed fronds swung in the current.
"Nick swung the rod back over
his shoulder and forward, and the line, curving forward, laid the
grasshopper down on one of the deep channels in the weeds. A trout
struck and Nick hooked him.
"Holding the rod far out toward
the uprooted tree and sloshing backward in the current, Nick worked
the trout, plunging, the rod bending alive, out of the danger of
the weeds into the open river. Holding the rod, pumping alive against the current, Nick brought the trout in. He rushed, but always
came, the spring of the rod yielding to the rushes, sometimes
jerking under water, but always bringing him in. Nick eased
downstream with the rushes. The rod above his head he led the trout
over the net, then lifted.
"The trout hung heavy in the
net, mottled trout back and silver sides in the meshes. Nick
unhooked him; heavy sides, good to hold, big undershot jaw and
slipped him, heaving and big sliding, into the long sack that hung from
his shoulders in the water.
"Nick spread the mouth of the
sack against the current and it filled, heavy with water. He held
it up, the bottom in the stream, and the water poured out through
the sides. Inside at the bottom was the big trout, alive in the
water.
"Nick moved downstream. The sack
out ahead of him sunk heavy in the water, pulling from his
shoulders.
"It was getting hot, the sun hot
on the back of his neck."
|